So what is your point here? It seems like you are suggesting the following:

While men die from suicide more than women, what is a more urgent issue is that women attempt suicide more often than men.

You're kind of making the authors point here, no? You're favoring women as victims, even when they survive suicide and men die from it.

Where did you learn to favor women as victims? Did you learn it from the Patriarchy? Or somewhere else...